2007년 6월 13일 수요일

As people grow bigger by their habits and obsesstions, a new word, "globesity" has been created. The word combines globe and obesity, infact, more than a quarter of the popel in the world are overweight. Of these, three hundred million are obese.
Obesity is caused by an imbalance between calories-in and calories-out. In other words, what you eat and how you use energy to burn it off. however, all over the world, it seems that we are losing the battle to get this simple equation right. Obesity can harm people in numerous ways. Malnutrition can lead to serious diseases such as diabetes and chronic kidney failure. It is also very costly to have training or car eprogram for obese poeple. Obesity itself also can eventually be fatal if unaddressed.
This global issue has warned me as well. The fast-going society and my daily life soon made me overweight. My busy life makes me grab a burger in McDonalds, and being a Korean highschooler - when we are forced to sit down and study for more than thirteen hours - is a lot of stress. In fact, there are growing number of child obesity over the world. The cause and effect of eating disorder is particularly affecting children.
Child obesity can be more fatal than adults who can control themselves. They can also be mor eopen toward illnesses; for example, child obesity is a major contributor to type 2 diabetes. More than 85 percent of affected children are either overweight or obese at the time of diagnosis. To prevent any worsen effect, I believe the world should show more concern of obese people.

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DK :

some spelling mistakes over there my dear